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kuromomo, 15 Oct 2008 12:52 am

Story She stood there blankly for a few seconds, then finally walked slowly out of the classroom, holding onto all those heavy books. I followed her out quietly, without her noticing me.

How did she managed to take so many books? They must be heavy.

She gradually climbed down the staircase, the books in her hands are losing balance somehow.Ah! Why am I so tense?

I'm worried that she might lost her balance and fall.

But, it still happened. The books that she's carrying are so tall that they blocked her sight. She can't see exactly what she is stepping on. And, she lost her footing.

"Be careful!" I shouted, then realised I shouldn't, as I'm supposed to be following her without she noticing. =.="
But it was too late.

"Gah!" I heard her voice as she fell to the bottom of the stairs, making alot of noise on the way.

"Bang" And it stops finally.

Is she okay? I quickly rushed down the stairs to see how she's doing.
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Whew! 3rd part done, after about 2 months of not doing another scene [chinese ver.]
I quickly translated after writing out the chinese version, and well, poor translation as always... >.<"
PS:Wow! I didn't know I have 6 fans already! Thanks so much! ^^

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